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If You Find The ‘Psychic Knock’ Post, Don’t Decide To Play

None of us realized what we were getting into. David is the one who clicked on the post and decided we should play.


It was Thursday night and David’s dad was working. Naturally, at the prospect of finding ourselves on a Friday night unsupervised, we were drawn to David’s Dad’s house, like moths into fire.

We are all 17 years old. Before we played the game we were beset with that unshakable, idealist faith of youth. Nothing could touch us; we would live forever.

Nobody believed it was real. The four of us have done a dozen of these rituals. Our little “Scooby Doo Club” consists of me, my boyfriend David, Donna and Mike. If I’m being truthful, smoking a bowl and poking around with the rituals online is kind of fun. The only thing any of them ever actually did was make our skin crawl at the implication of what if?–only make us jump at unexpected sounds and non-aggressive shadows. Everyone’s played Bloody Mary…but nobody actually expects to see her in the mirror. In our world of warning labels, the only thrill left that you can find is the thrill of ignoring them.

We were crowded in the living room, scrolling through videos on the smart TV. Donna had queued up a video that was supposed to be unsettling. It wasn’t. The caption on the video read:

“Japanese Girl Suicide Picture Urban Legend”

Supposedly, this girl had painted a picture of herself as a suicide note. Donna told us: “It was really popular in Korea and got spread around a lot.” The music edited onto the video was some kind of awful techno and didn’t convey the atmosphere of the story itself. Apparently if you stared into her eyes for long enough she would smirk and her hair would tossle lightly.

At least that’s what Donna said.

Donna’s choices are usually stupid. I didn’t see shit.

“Donna, this is fucking stupid and the music is annoying.” I told her.

She paused the video and glowered at me. “I thought you guys would like this. She’s pretty hot.”

David laughed and said: “We don’t care what she looks like. This is dumb. I’m with Gage on this one. I don’t really want to watch this girl’s face not change at all for five whole minutes.” thankful that he’d agreed with me, we exchanged a quiet high-five.

Donna huffed, “of course you’d agree with your stupid boyfriend. At least Mike agrees with me that she’s hot,” and then with a touch of the dramatic melancholy that was Donna’s trademark, she said to herself: “Her eyes are so sad.”

Mike giggled and threw a pillow at her. Getting a bit too stoned and giggling were Mike’s trademarks.

“Here’s one,” David grinned. He sent the browser command to the TV and opened Reddit.

Donna groaned: “I don’t wanna read.”

So David read the article for her. It was titled:

Never Play The Snapchat Game Psychic Knock


There was more to the rules than the post said. Here are a few more that I’ve come up with:

  • 1st: Do. Not. Play. This. Game.

  • 2nd: The person on the other side of the door must answer it.

  • 3rd: If they don’t, it will knock on your door instead.


None of us even expected the silly Snapchat user to be real… But it was. Go ahead and add it if you don’t believe me. You shouldn’t. But you probably will.

We all did.

callme_469

Mike giggled, “who should we do it to?”

David had a gleam of excitement in his eye. “My stepdad.”

“What if your mom answers?”

Donna sighed, “it’s not real, Gage.”

David was still grinning, “Mom is in Michigan visiting her sister. That’s why we’ve been here all week.”

The front door opened and we all jumped.

David’s sister Morgan doubled over in laughter, “Boo!” she held her side as she tried to catch her breath, “shouldn’t smoke so much, shit makes you paranoid.” She crossed into the darkened kitchen and opened the refrigerator door, bathing her face in the icy light, and grabbing a case of their dad’s beer. Then taking her keys from the counter, she headed back to the door. She stopped at the door before she left and turned back, eyeing David, “better get rid of the smell before Dad gets back. He doesn’t want you guys smoking in here.”

“Oh but you can take his beer to a party and that’s cool.”

“Shut up.” She rolled her eyes and with a cheerful, “later nerds,” was gone. We heard the snick if the lock behind her and moments later, her headlights shone through the kitchen window as the car backed out.

I was already wearing a black t-shirt, but David found clothes for the rest. A black sweater that hung loosely on Donna’s wiry-frame covered her past her shorts. A pair of pants for me. Mike was bigger, so David had improvised with one of his dad’s work uniforms: black cotton pants and a plain black chef coat. We looked ridiculous.

David had stolen his step dad’s cigarettes. We’d been smoking them all night, there were a few left and he insisted that was a good enough personal item.

I read through the rules again. “It’s not gonna work. We need a picture of the door.”

David handed me his phone with a grin. On the screen was a live video feed of the door in question. I looked back at him confused.

“He put in one of those camera doorbells a couple weeks ago. Dumb idiot put it behind the pillar so you can’t see anything except the door.” He giggled. “When you walk up to the house you can’t even see it. He’s been opening the door to yell at everyone who knocks now for not using the bell.”

Mike laughed so hard at this that his eyes filled with tears, “so perfect. He’ll be so mad.”

Donna pulled up Google maps and mapped the route to David’s mother and stepdad’s house.

The ritual began.

None of us thought it would work. As we passed the energy from one hand to the next it grew around us. The air felt oppressive–hot. As beads of sweat made my forehead wet, my breathing grew more short and staccatoed. I felt myself growing faint but calmed at the notion that I was just freaking myself out. Then I looked at David and realized he wasn’t in control of himself any longer.

The house rumbled with the energy and we heard a hissing voice from everywhere around us growl: YESSSSSS.

The candle snuffed out. David’s eyes were round planets with stars swirling in them; open wide as if held open by invisible grubby fingers. When the candle relit, it burned with the intensity of a soldering flame, hot and blinding-white. I didn’t want to, but I felt compelled as the others raised their arms to do the same. David’s eyes changed to glistening and empty pools of milk.

He knocked three times into the air in front of him.

The candle snuffed itself again, leaving the room in cavernous darkness, save for the lights of the phones displaying the map and the live feed of the door.

The door that his stepdad did not open.

We could see him through the glass at the top; heard as he swore on the other side of the closed door through the live video feed: “Sonofabitch. You fuckin kids. Knock on this fuckin door again. I’ll fuckin–” his voice trailed off as he moved away.

Donna was excited. “Holy shit. Does that mean it worked? He heard it?” Nobody else spoke.

Thud

Mike offered a blood curdling scream that rang until Donna covered his mouth with her hand. She directed all of us, with her eyes to be quiet.

We stared at each other not making a sound.

Mike was typing something.

Thud

His eyes shone with panic, like an animal trapped. He handed Donna his phone:

do you think that's it? the thing? will it give up like in the doorbell vid??

“There was nothing in the doorbell video. Just my stepdad yelling,” David whispered.

“Shhh,” Donna hissed.

The door opened slowly and nobody moved as a dark shadow entered.

“Sorry, couldn’t get my key to work. Forgot my dumb phone.” Morgan looked at us for a second like we had three heads each. Grabbing her phone out of her room, she then looked directly at Mike, “I know that was you. You scream like a girl.”

We doubled over in laughter. Slowly over the course of the next half hour ease had settled back into the room.

“I don’t think I’ve ever heard a dude scream like that,” Donna jibed him.

He threw another pillow at her, “Whatever dude. That was fuckin scary as shit,” and he began giggling again.

The rest of the night passed without incident and we kind of forgot about it.


I was hanging out with David the following night. It was just the two of us. Morgan was staying with a friend and his dad was off at work again.

Bing

Our phones chimed in unison. A new Snapchat message. I fiddled with my phone and tapped the notification. Large white letters filled the black screen:

You called me, but no-one answered. I will return, one of you must let me in.

It was from callme_469

“So stupid,” David said putting his phone down on the coffee table. I felt uneasy.

THUD

I felt my stomach fall away.

David looked startled but got up saying, “It’s probably my dad. The lock sticks,” he was almost to the door.

“Wait!” I shouted.

David froze as I walked to the kitchen window and gestured to the empty driveway, “If that’s him–”

“–how did he get home?” He finished for me.

We weren’t being loud enough to be heard but a voice responded. Mike’s dad. “Son, it is your Father, home here now. Lock sticking. Open door for Father?” The words sounded new. Whatever was on the other side of the door spoke with the right voice but the sentence was jumbled like the thing was saying words it hadn’t used before. They were harsh. Emphasized wrongly.

Bing

This time the message read:

My father's house has many rooms.

We grew silent and stared at each other.

Bing

Many rooms have many doors

The knocking began again, this time all around us.

THUD THUD THUD

THUD THUD KNOCK

BANG THUD POUND

THUD POUND BANG
THUD THUD KNOCK
BANG POUND

It came from the kitchen cabinets, from closets, from cupboards, doorways, it rattled the mirrors of the medicine cabinets, it shook from inside of the refrigerator. It rapped at everything that had a door and when that didn’t work it began knocking on walls, the ceiling and floors.

David began hyperventilating. I was in shock.

Then as quickly as it began, it ended. Headlights bathed the front of the house through the kitchen window. Before long we could hear someone at the lock muttering: “Goddamit”

Knock, knock, knock.

“Hey!” His shouts were muffled behind the door. “I can’t get my key to–nevermind.”

We both heard the sound as the key found it’s home in the lock tumblers and snicked the bolt aside.

I may have imagined the monstrous, formless shadow that loomed behind him; imagined the smile full of teeth shining in the dark like boxcutter blades…

…But I can’t be sure if I saw anything, because as soon as the door inched open wide enough, I bolted out, past David’s father and his confused expression of shock, and out into the night.

I didn’t stop running until I was at the door to my own house, but I couldn’t bring myself to open it; unsure of whether it was safe. Initially I’d grazed the handle and couldn’t be sure if I’d heard a knock or if it was the beating sound of blood in my ears.

Bing

I recognized the line from my years in Sunday School–paraphrased and perverted to serve its sinister purpose:

I stand at the door and knock. If anyone hears my voice and opens the door, I will come in to him and eat

I’ve been calling David for hours now. He isn’t picking up.

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3 Comments

  1. Max

    No story is on here… just a blank page. Perhaps something went wrong with the upload?

  2. Anne

    Soooo good and sooooo creepy! I LOVE it!!!!

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